@Drilian said:
For instance, take this song:
http://deadlyredcube.com/Longing.mp3">http://deadlyredcube.com/Longing.mp3
http://mopofdestiny.com/ost/01-Piano%20Of%20Destiny.mp3).
Josh
I won't bore you to death with my history or where I studied and what I did.
The first one is basically crap. That's Ok though because you have to write these kind of repetitive things to progress (everyone does) - especially when you probably don't have any formal training in composition and orchestration, which most of us don't.
The first one reminds me of what Pink Floyd used to do in the late sixties (after dear old Sid Barrett had gone mad and left the group - GRHS) - with different instruments obviously - but more importantly - with a vocal over the top. So you would get this constant droning of repeated chords with the vocals helping to make it more interesting. That's the thing about repitition - if you're going to repeat lines you need to change the orchestration - a lot, or at least build it up. There are many classical examples of this - Ravel for instance - or Pachobel (sic?).
Another thing that's worth considering is the use of the same instrument that's playing a lead over the top of a drone. For instance - the flute. The average human listener gets bored with the same sound after a while - so it may be worth switching the lead parts with other instruments from the woodwinds in this case. BUT - you need to have a really interesting thematic lead line - not just rambling with a patch that you picked at random and then played on a keyboard a la improvisation. You need to work on it.
The second one. What I would now try and do just as an exercise is to orchestrate the opening section before the first change (obviously). Nice chord progression and quite filmic in some ways. The secret may be to stop thinking in terms of chords - and more in terms of parts.