William,
Great chart and fantastic realization! I've always dug Rosza. I read once that he had a clause in his contract with MGM that gave him 3 months a year off from scoring pictures so he would have time to concentrate on writing legit stuff. Somehow, in his movie music, he just hit the mark to make stuff sound "Roman," despite the fact that there was nothing particularly Roman about it at all. I always get a hoot out of those scenes in Ben-Hur where we are supposed to believe that the marches and fanfares are being played by the band in the movie...on axes that are pretty much brass vuvuzelas. It's kinda like Korngold convincing us that the perfect music for a 1930s movie about 16th century pirates is late-19th century Romantic orchestral music. Weird, but he was sure right!
As for your march, I really enjoy it. The humanizing effects really bring it to life. Do you have a performable score and parts? I'd love to run it by the leader of a wind band that I play in. We do a concert with a pipe organ every year and I think this chart would be great fun to play and go over very well with our audience.
Congratulations and keep up the good work!
Tom