@servandus said:
Thanks a lot, Goran. I'll leave this sequence rest for a while, and then I'll get back to it to see if I can improve it with your suggestions. What you and William said about the woodwinds in general, and the solo oboe in particular, is also quite clear to me, and I also suspected the basses could also have a little more presence in the mix as Tom suggested, but it would be really helpful if you could be a little more specific about the possible improvements in the strings, as this is actually what I'm focusing on first, and is far more important for me right now. So far, I'm quite glad with how the string section sounds (including the initial solo), and maybe except for the phrasing in the codetta, which is maybe a little monotonous, I wouldn't really know what else to change. So, I'd be very grateful if you could point those passages I may be totally overlooking.
Thanks again for listening, and for your encouraging words.
PS: btw. the solo violin in the introduction is actually not layered, but I think it could be the ubiquitous use of VelXF which may be giving you the impression of layering... especially in the progressive vibrato patch?? It's impressive how your "sample-trained ears" can associate what you hear with a specific technique... Wish I can sharpen my ears that way someday (^_^)
What I would change in the strings (as the very first change) is the relation of the room reflections component width to the dry component width - the dry component is too wide, making the sum sound too edgy (at least I hear it that way). Then eventually take same additional "edge" away with an eq, but I would be very careful with that - it is in my experience very easy to project the "edginess" stemming from the above mentionend problem into the frequency area, but this is more often then not a delusion - the problem initially percieved as a frequency problem could either dissapear completely or be drastically reduced as soon as the width relations of signal components are properly set.
That would be my first suggestions, for what they're worth 😉
The solo violin - in that case I believe it is the slight VelXF "overdose" which occasionally breakes through - but it is a nice effect, it actually doesn't bother me as "unnatural" in any way. It reminds me of a similarly sounding effect Bruckner
employs in the slow movement of the Eight Symphony (the 3 solo violins in unisono-passage)...
"Sample-trained" ears are a double-edged sword (although I won't complain too much) - the subject always reminds me of the audio engineer whose name I forgot but who said he would sometimes hear bad edits in concerts :-))
P.S. Compliments on Vayatelas, these are very impressive piano compositions...