This is so much reminiscent of LEONARD ROSENMAN it's startling. And I mean that as a big compliment.

If you haven't already, you ought to check out the score to EAST OF EDEN.

Interesting stuff. ... still listening now.

Evan Evans

I don't care for the Organ, it does not match the orchestration-al size of the orchestra.

I very much like your use of the flutes and clarinet and pizzicato. The organ sounds terrible though.

But I think your orchestrations would work pretty well in real life. At least satisfactorily.

Evan EVans

@mvanbebber said:

Paul-
First, yes, I am a student at a University.

Just forget about it, thanks anyways for the comments.

-mvanbebber

It was not my intention to irritate. Overall, I think it has very good merits as a composition and I would like to hear the finished article with real players when it's recorded.

How's that?

Mike, I am downloading it to listen -- but already have a comment or two, based on friendliness because you have listened and commented on my examples:

you gave three odd warning signs in the posts above: (1) student, (2) only two weeks work, (3) (paraphrase) don't comment on how it sounds, just the music in it -- the combination effectively would warn me away from listening were it not for the residue of friendliness. Really, it is not easy to listen to a not-well-worked-out realization, translate that mentally to a score, then comment on the score. One help would be to offer to show the score, since it seems you are concerned with musical composition issues!

Having said that -- now I'll go listen and report back ....

Guglielmo

... and reporting back after a couple of listens ...

the woodwind melodies are handled well, the tonal combinations work pretty well too. For improvement of an already good composition, perhaps a couple of ideas: there are many places where relatively static chords underly faster moving melodic fragments in imitation -- maybe too much of that. Stravinsky's Symphonies of Wind Instruments might be a good model to look at for many reasons, but especially the way everything is light-footed and fleet except where weight is needed. The final climax is probably too short, could build for another 15-30 seconds imo. The whole structural balance seems a little accidental to me, not sure in its pacing.

There was a place where things got dense in the lower registers -- that might be even more dense (TOO dense, in other words) with a real orchestra. Good luck. Post a recording of the orchestra, when done!

@evanevans said:

I don't care for the Organ, it does not match the orchestration-al size of the orchestra.

I very much like your use of the flutes and clarinet and pizzicato. The organ sounds terrible though.
Evan EVans

Evan-
There is no organ. You are probably hearing the trombone/cello combination on the half note chords? These are just Opus 1 sus samples, maybe this is a produciton problem? All of this is French Oboe and Opus 1.
thanks for the compliments though, I will listen to East of Eden - I haven't heard it, or anything by Leonard Rosenman.
thanks again,
Mike

Mike,

I like the interweaving of ultra modern extended harmonies and Bristish folk-stlye melodies. Nice.

--Jay

Mike,

You are gonna flip then when you hear it! It's one of the most incredible scores of all time, and it is RIGHT up your alley!

Tell me what you think once you've heard it. Try the NONESUCH release called LEONARD ROSENMAN. You are going to love it!

I once heard a concert work of his on the radio and had to pull over and listen for an hour. Afterwards they announced that it was by film composer Leonard Rosenman. That's when I discovered him and that's when I dove deep. Although, what I didn't realize was that I already loved his score to STAR TREK IV: THE VOYAGE HOME (my favorite ST film).

Evan Evans

@JBacal said:

Mike,

I like the interweaving of ultra modern extended harmonies and Bristish folk-stlye melodies. Nice.

--Jay

That really means alot coming from you. Thanks very much for the compliments!
-Mike

@PaulR said:

It was not my intention to irritate. Overall, I think it has very good merits as a composition and I would like to hear the finished article with real players when it's recorded.

How's that?

Paul-
Thanks for that - I will post a recording when I get it. I wasn't 'fishing for compliments', just 'fishing for comments', and thank you for your comments.
-Mike