Hi Steff,
Nice to finally see your Berg on the forum, and certainly well deserved, I had already told you through emails when you sent me a sneak peak of it, how impressed I was and still am. It's also refreshing to have some Berg on the forum, not many people would dare to attempt a mock-up by him. I appreciate especially the meticulous way you layered all the instruments, I haven't seen this score recently but I could imagine it must of demanded a lot of concentration.
Now I'll be brutally honest, despite the great qualities that are present, to me the atmosphere is dead, sorry to put it this way but I'm being honest. It sounds TOO perfect, TOO worked, TOO evenly balanced etc... to me it needs to loosen a bit but keeping it in a disciplinary way. Sometimes I feel all the instruments are all lined up.
All in all some human touch wouldn't hurt. Please take this with a grain of salt. [:D]
Nice to finally see your Berg on the forum, and certainly well deserved, I had already told you through emails when you sent me a sneak peak of it, how impressed I was and still am. It's also refreshing to have some Berg on the forum, not many people would dare to attempt a mock-up by him. I appreciate especially the meticulous way you layered all the instruments, I haven't seen this score recently but I could imagine it must of demanded a lot of concentration.
Now I'll be brutally honest, despite the great qualities that are present, to me the atmosphere is dead, sorry to put it this way but I'm being honest. It sounds TOO perfect, TOO worked, TOO evenly balanced etc... to me it needs to loosen a bit but keeping it in a disciplinary way. Sometimes I feel all the instruments are all lined up.
All in all some human touch wouldn't hurt. Please take this with a grain of salt. [:D]