Hi Nick,
Overall, I thought the mix has more clarity now. I think you improved everything except possibly the high legato violin lines. These are the very hardest to get right. Perhaps some of the mixing gurus on the forum can give some suggestions on how to best "sweeten" them.
I might try layering in a hint of solo violin here and there, using the sul and portamento articulations on a few notes, maybe rolling off some of the high frequencies on the violins (but EQ is NOT my strong point). Getting the perfect high string sound is extremely difficult. I have never been 100% happy with my own results in this regard but I keep trying new combinations of techniques. And so I recommend you keep experimenting too. Perhaps you will figure out the holy grail of sampling-- lush, romantic, sweeping melodic string lines. Then you can tell us all how it's done. [:)]
Sounding good.
Best,
Jay