Thanks to both of you, William and Tom!
William: Your ears don't deceive you. You are the King of Detail when it comes to this stuff. Yes, guilty as charged of forgetting the global legato setting :) It is a midi performance, considering Becky's in the midst of some busy work that won't give her the time to learn the piece. Of course, that's the end goal one day, with a suitable pianist...not me. The fact that there was a time when certain composers on this forum felt it necessary to let me know how bad my music and/or mock-up skills were, and in consideration of the fact that they are highly respectful of your work...well, I guess I feel good getting your approval, William :)
Tom: Thanks again for your always kind and motivating words. I believe one of the reasons William's production chops are so extraordinary, is his uncanny sensitivity to sound and how instruments work/behave. He really is at the top of the heap of VSL masters, alongside the usual heroes, like Guy Bacos, of course!
Cheers!
Dave