Hi Jerry,
I got a chance to listen the entire movement. All I can say is that it is very beautiful and harmonically rich. Its Mahlerian at times. I like how you maintain the (deceptively simple) opening theme all through the piece and build around it.
One comment Id like to make though, is regarding the strings, which sounds a bit synthy to me. They sound as if I they are played out of a tiny boombox. The good music left me wishing for a better string sound or (good) live performance of this piece. I know VSL strings sound better than this. Perhaps it was something in the mix that changed it. Or maybe its my ears, but I am hoping not ! (I do have good headphones out of which I listen to recordings from leading orchestras all the time)
Best
Anand