Hi Phillip
I like the interpretation and the sound. Congratulation.
If you want to come even closer to the realty you should a bit humanize the tempo - my opinion.
It seems that the tempo is constant through the whole piece - this uncover the computer behind this piece very soon.
So little ritardandos before new sequences are starting could improve this matter perhaps.
So as a Swiss I recomment a bit more (cheese) fondue with the tempo... [;)]
I hope not to hurt you with this feedback.
Beat
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