Hi Dominique, thanks for sharing. I enjoyed your trio...I listened to it twice (:-). It's an intimate cantabile, I mean it. Why do you want to improve it? Certainly there's always room for improvement but, overall, I think your piece is kind to the ears, (something which is difficult for me to find nowadays).
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Yes, sorry Dominique. I forgot about it. I guess that if you want people to give you some tips you have to be a bit more SPECIFIC. Or you can buy some books on "orchestral simulation", (for example, click above in VIENNA ACADEMY, or go to Scribd.com). You may find useful what Alan Belkin has to say.
http://www.musique.umontreal.ca/personnel/Belkin/Simulation.html
Apparently, some time ago he was in this forum. Also, at his site, check his free books (and articles); (it's the 2nd time I mention him in this forum).
Regards
Mr String (who also has a desire to improve)
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