I don't know what type of comments you look for but I'll give it a try.
Overall, I like the music very much.
The mix is very clear, all the parts are easy to discern and you bring to the front the right musical motif of the moment.
If you try to emulate a real orchestra, I would suggest the following:
Some glissandi seems to me out of place to me. (Unatural)
This piece would benefit of a little more dynamics in the accompaniment parts (mostly), that would help to underline your main theme a little more and would emulate a real orchestra better in my view.
Hope this help!
Keep up the good work