mathis,
I just listened to you piece as well. Very good. You are very talented. Just keep going and learning. If you find a texture in a score (for example woodwinds or brass in a Ravel piece) try using the structure (the way the instruments are used in vertical and horizontal relationship) and use your own melody and harmony. I think you will get a more authentic and bigger sound (VSL will help with this as well.) If it's too big or too orchestrated for what you want then just pull some things out.
A philosophical point: Since you already know what you know and have your own gifts in music, consider that you want to know what other composers know. This will only strengthen your abilities and make you more diverse. It will also help you execute your own ideas more perfectly.
Evan may be able to provide numerous helpful incites at this time. Private study is the launching pad for most artists.
Again, I enjoyed your music and original ideas,
Dave Connor
I just listened to you piece as well. Very good. You are very talented. Just keep going and learning. If you find a texture in a score (for example woodwinds or brass in a Ravel piece) try using the structure (the way the instruments are used in vertical and horizontal relationship) and use your own melody and harmony. I think you will get a more authentic and bigger sound (VSL will help with this as well.) If it's too big or too orchestrated for what you want then just pull some things out.
A philosophical point: Since you already know what you know and have your own gifts in music, consider that you want to know what other composers know. This will only strengthen your abilities and make you more diverse. It will also help you execute your own ideas more perfectly.
Evan may be able to provide numerous helpful incites at this time. Private study is the launching pad for most artists.
Again, I enjoyed your music and original ideas,
Dave Connor